Asides on AI prose quality (from "I don't want to read LLM output")

Here’s your paragraph as one cogent sentence: “AI prose is dense and meandering at once, so word count no longer signals information content and the reader does the work the writer should have.” Did I lose anything? If not, the technique isn’t diagnostic of anything except that most writing is longer than it needs to be, including yours. Oh by the way, an LLM did that summarization.